I liked this. I thought you told the story pretty well in 60 seconds and I like the graphics though some wouldn't of taken long to improve. Entertaining though; Well done. :)
A bit funny
but more effort in the drawing would make it more worth watching.
Thanks for the critique, it was kind of rushed because it was a school project and it had a deadline, but i will keep this in mind next time.
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